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Thursday, March 13, 2008

A Polynesian Rhapsody


I was experimenting with a style I hadn't tried in poetry: experience projection. Describing through somebody else's eyes, not your own. Writing as how they would have felt in a given situation. And I came up with this, inspired by "Pioneers of the Pacific" a recent article in the National Geographic Magazine (Roff Smith and Stephen Alvarez, March 2008) about an ancient race of Native Pacific explorers who discovered and colonized almost all of the hundreds of then uninhabited, scattered Pacific islands east of Australia, including Fiji, Tahiti, Easter Island, Polynesia, starting 3000 years back. Their daring voyages in those ancient times have been equated to lunar landings of 1900s in terms of their relative boldness at the time they were undertaken.

They used to undertake long voyages on their hand-built and hand-rigged canoes (no fossil fuel power 3000 years ago :) ), searching for new islands to settle upon. It wasn't like they were forced to move, or that there was pressure on the land. They numbered only a few thousands and the islands were way too many, nearly 300 in Fiji alone. They did it all just for the sake of exploring new frontiers. Researchers now say that one of the reasons why they were able to undertake such long and daring voyages was that they went against the direction of generally prevailing wind currents, so that even if they did not discover any new land, they could just turn around and the wind would take them back where they started from.
Eventually, in a 1000 next years or so, their descendants perhaps reached South America also, eastward from Australia.

So I kind of got inspired from the concept and the wonderful photography in the article and wrote something. It captures a particular moment in the life of two of these people---a couple. The man is setting out on an indefinite voyage to the sea, not knowing when he will be able to return, and even if he will return or not---because after all it's going to be him against the ocean. Here is what his beloved says to him before he sets out.

Go forth, mariner
The blue stretches to infinity

Discover a new paradise

For the two of us...


May the gods guide your way,
The heavens steer you right
And when your spot new land

Marked by towering banks of cloud

Beyond the dusky horizon
And billowing fumes from boiling lava

Oozing into the ocean,

May the guardian spirits

Protect your canoe from the heat..


But if you do not find it
Ride the trade winds back home soon
I'll be waiting
In our moss-hung cave beneath the cliff

Obsidian will shimmer
Vivid tropical blossoms will sparkle

In my soul
Getting a whiff of

Your intoxicating scent of the sea

Paradise wherever you will be.



*Obsidian is a kind of beautiful natural volcanic glass used in that culture for making ornaments and stuff.

This collage was complied by me for the poem.



The text of the NGM article can be found here.
Pics courtesy Google Image Search, Corbis and Stephen Alvarez for NGM.
Poem (c) Sanyukta, March 2008.

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15 said something. Why don't you?:

Abhimanyu said...

just few words------> recondite love made shallow..great..n i cnt say much...love hainaa...beyond words

Anonymous said...

Truly You. After that Natural/Scenic pics blog , i tht u r in a downtrend slide, but u came with a BANg ,,NIce Blog to end with a Nice Waltz.

The Keeper of the Keys said...

oh i like this idea of experience projection...reminds me of jabberwocky...lol
but great poem, man!
and lovely collage.

i'm upset that we don't get national geographic at our place any more. *sniff*

The Keeper of the Keys said...

by the way, i borrowed your clickcomment box!
hope you don't mind.

ishmeet said...

In one word: nice.
In two words: very nice.
In three words: very bery nice.
...
In infinite words: Oh guru, chaa gaye..chak de phatte nap de killi subah jalandhar shaam nu dilli..hahahahahahahaha.

Okay, Navjot Sidhu ki aatma over.

I love the feel behind the poem because the beloved says that if he will discover something new, it'll be good but even if he doesn't, she'll still love him as much. That's what you meant right?

Nice collage as well, complements the poem really well.

Naveen said...

nice poem .... u can paint with words..

A Nerd Anarch said...

I've so much to say, but am running out of time these days. But you just wait, I'll get back to you pretty soon..

For the time being, just hear this: what made me visit your blog was it's name -Serendipity- it was mine blog's name too initially, when I started blogging. It still is my one of my favourite words. C U Anon :-)

Sanyukta said...

@Abhi:
Yeah, right. :) Thanks!

@Anon:
Thanks :) Downtrend slide? Never!

@Nids
Thank you :)
Nevermind..you can still read NGM stuff online....but yeah, nothing can beat the feel of those fabulous pics on those super-glossy papers :D
erhm...*hands you a tissue for the "sniff" * :P

No probs about the clickcomment box. I borrowed from someplace else :D

@Ish

Thank you ji thank you!! :)
"Siddhu ki aatma"...LOL.

Yes, that's egg-jactly what I meant. :) Prehistoric times were so simple relatively...*sigh*

@Naveen

Thanks a lot for the compliment! :)

@A Nerd anarch

Alright, I'll wait. (Ain't no other option, right? ) :D (Whoa. It's been ages since I used 'ain't' and 'no' together. :D )
yeah, 'Serendipity' is such a lovely word. Carpe diem is one of my favorite expressions as well. So idealistic :P

ardi k said...

I think all poetry is projection...
into another time or place or feeling--all different dimensions the writer shares with the reader/listener. You do it well.

Never Give up said...

Hi di

I am visiting your blog for the first time.I am daughter of ever hopeful. My mom has completed her Ph.D. Its true Pagal Hote Doctor. I will read ur blog every sunday.

Love

Sanyukta said...

@Ardi K:

Thanks :)

@Never give up

Hey Ananya! Cool to see you here....so Anu di completed her Ph.D. That's great news. Keep coming back :)

The Keeper of the Keys said...

ya, exactly, i hate reading stuff on the comp. not the same 'feel'.

adi said...

aha!
glad to have found out
and to ponder upon that...
....
human nature has remain same and will remain same, for ever, a beloved will always wait for the lover to return, and tears will always sparkle in her eyes like obsidian...
...before, with or after us, one thing that has remain constant is love.

Sanyukta said...

@Adi:

Beautiful lines. :) Thanks :)

Siladitya said...

Did Steve Harvey copy the book title Act Like A Lady Think Like A Man

and theme from an earlier book?



Book with same title & theme copyrighted and published by Sharon P. Carson in 2003





CHICAGO, IL – Sharon P. Carson the author of the original title: Act Like A Lady –Think Like A Man, watched the February 27th episode of the Ophra show on which Steve Harvey was promoting his book of the same title. She was hoping that Steve would reveal to Oprah where he got the title and the theme for the book. It just seemed odd to her that his book had the same title and theme as her book that was copy written in 2003.



Upon subsequently purchasing the book, she found some interesting parallels and realized that it is not unusual for a high profiled person to take a great title and theme, rewrite a book and use their celebrity status to sell it. This she says happens too often to the unsung poets, authors and entrepreneurs of the world.



Steve wrote in his book that his hope was to “empower you with a wide-open look into the minds of men”. Sharon P. Carson wrote in her book in 2003 that her hope was for women to gain some insight into how men think in terms of relationships. Sharon also noted that in chapter 8 of Steve Harvey’s book titled “Why Men Cheat” he came to the same conclusion that she did in chapter 37 of her book, titled “Why would a man cheat”, and the answer was, “because they can”.



Sharon actively promoted her book before the release in January 2009 of Steve Harvey’s book, and would not like to see her promotion efforts hindered. She feels that her book has much to offer from a woman’s perspective and seeks to empower women to practice self love and tough love in relationships.



Before the publication of Steve Harvey’s book of the same title, Sharon bought the domain name: www.actlikealadythinklikeaman.com from which she has been selling her book. She has also held seminars with women at a Chicago University in promotion of her book, and can be viewed on the following youtube clip as she was being interviewed on a cable television program about her book in 2007 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxVVQX15X2Y.



Mindful of all the self - published poets and authors who have a hard time finding publishers for their works, Sharon is currently consulting with attorneys regarding her options, and hopes that her book with the first and original title of Act Like A Lady Think Like A Man will finally receive the recognition it deserves for the wisdom, encouragement, and empowerment that it provides to women.